Beforez's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Daft-Danz]

guud

Hmm, the sine synth is too sharp,
the drums are too bold,
the rest great...
More variation would be helpful, and the sine - please - not only in my left ear ;)
Hm, It got a little boring @ 0:45/0:46 ... I expected a stream. :)

Liau responds:

:D ta' for crit :P I'll try to keep the balance!
stream? :P

[Heavy area music]

woooooh!

This sounds like rammstein, but a little 'fake guitar'
Redo it with a real guitar ;)

also,
9/10 5/5 +fav +download

Liau responds:

I'd love to! just have to figure out how to play it again lol :D

[The Dre@m]

I like that

Great!! I like it.

Some bad things:
Too sharp snare,
Don't cry about 0-bombers, we all got that problem ;)

8/10 4/5

SFaPiL2 responds:

Thanks.

I'll be more careful with the snare the next time I'll make a song.

*sigh*... I guess you're right about the 0-bombers. I just find it to be a stupid way to have fun.

[Super Mario Acoustic Guitar]

Ah, yeah... Garagebandy ^^,

The guitar sounds familiar, as in GarageBand.
Anything with 'Summer" in its name or.. =\

But, its HELLGREAT! Nice!
10/10 5/5

BadgerMan08 responds:

thanks for the comment but i didn't use garageband.

[Space Theme 1980]

Ancient future loops =D

Nice sounds =D
It realy represents the "old future".

its just not looping good, and it should be a song.
Anyway, it sounds good, it needs improvement, and thanks for sharing it with us under this license. It might be VERY useful in my future projects. (double-meaning of future :D)

MalTheDestroyer responds:

Thanks for the feedback! No mp3 ever loops properly in Flash; it needs to be converted back to wav and imported into Flash as a wav. It will then loop properly when Flash compiles it as an mp3. :)

[Public Loop]

najs2

Yes, videogame loop ;)
the few dry bassdrums at the beginning aren't good, but the rest is kinda nice for a few minutes song BUT... I do not rate anyone's music higher or lower because of the time they spent on it.
I am sure you can make better music if you take a little longer ;)

Puul responds:

Thank you. But unfortunally I saved the mp3 file, but I lost the file for the programe, so it will be a little hard to remake this one. So I guess that I can´t do the same again. Besides, I only have a very simple programe, so that I will never be able to make music like ZeroBass or an other great artists at NG.
However, thanks for the review, very helpfull ;)

[Russian Bassline Project 2]

meh, okay.

Meh, not great, since the melodies are not 100% your own and token from basshunter's russia privjet and I don't see great improvements.

But, also, not bad, since its very nice music and I like it.

I would suggest making the drums bigger, like an (open) hi-hat on every bass, and a saw as melody since you call it bassline project.

DJToxxic responds:

i didnt take the melodies from basshutner on these two.